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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Mon Sep 08, 2008 2:51 pm

thanks, Smile
I want to write more but I just seem to be a little blocked at the moment...

And I'm glad you like my banners too, just trying out some things on photobucket. If any of you have any ideas for more just PM me Very Happy

Paz y amor!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:54 pm

You use to be

You use to be there for me all time.

Now your not here and I need you .

You use to be my hero you use to fight alway my villans and procact me.

Now I have to fight them myself.

You use to you all the time but the only way I can see is my dream.

You to be my best friend but now your not here .

You should that I was like the liltte sister I now your little sister miss you so much.

Am cry so much because I miss you soo much cant you see I need you right right now with me.

Its not fair you cant be gone cant you see I need you here.

I know you need to be in that place. Even know that your not with me I fell that your all around.

You use to be there when I was in trouble now your not here I get my self out of trouble

I miss you and I wish you were still here but you cant be here
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:05 pm

Thats pretty Smile
though I think you could use a bit more of the tecnical devices like metaphores and things to make it more like a poem.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Sep 17, 2008 10:41 pm

vampirefairy wrote:
I miss you and I wish you were still here but you cant be here


I know how that is...

Here's my latest:
Close The Gap
She’s curled in a ball
In the middle of her bed
She’s quiet, but shaking
Then the sobs break through

There’s a hole in her heart
It’s only growing larger
A gapping chasm
That’s way past it’s due

Tonight’s the worst night
She can’t control it
The good days
They’re far and few

The tears never stop
Even after they’ve dried up
She can’t find help
Doesn’t know what to do

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:37 am

Leave!

Leave..I dont want to see you again....
after all this pain...

I used to cry on your shoulders when i felt hurt..
I used to find peace in your arms when i was insecure..
I used to find warmth in your kisses when i felt cold.....

But now..cant you see that every thing in you has changed
I hardly know you anymore.....

your eyes are not showing love as before...
your touches have become so cold........
even your kisses are loosing their warmth..

I just want you to leave....without apologizing or saying a word....
I'm asking you to leave but deep down it's too hard on me to let you go......

but this is the only choice i have....
this is the only solution to get rid of all this pain....
the pain of loosing your love day after a day....
this is the only way to move on.....and to start over again...
a new life without your love and care.....

but i want you to know that even if you leave
even if you go..
you will always have a piece of my heart...

Its just that i know somtomes its harder to walk away from the pain,
Than it is to deal with it.l





* I cant stand him *


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:53 am

I like Him?

I love him?
I dont!
I like him?
I wont!
I will?
Ill kill!
if i just stop the wars in my head?
but then I will be dead!
and i wont love him?
i cant. . .me Kim!
on a whim!
like him!
without the thunder?
without the lightining?
without the wonder?
without the fighting?

Why do I like HIM ?
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Sat Sep 27, 2008 11:36 am

XXTeamBellaXX wrote:

Why do I like HIM ?


I think every girl wonders about this at one point or another. Well done.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:54 pm

I like it Alexis!
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:00 pm

I don't think this is one of my better ones, but here goes nothing.

True Friendship

The world's a cold place.
You can feel lost and alone.
But if you have friends,
it's not quite so bad.
Because friends keep each other
under their wings.
They make one another
feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
And a beautiful thing is that
you only need one, true friend.
Although it is great
to have many friends,
one's all you really need
to bring happiness into life
and make the world
a little less cold.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:04 pm

I like it.


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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:07 pm

I don't think this is one of my better ones, but here goes nothing.

Time

Time is boundless.
My heart is foundless
of love.

Time goes on forever,
so I still have time to endeavor
my white dove.

Though my heart is empty,
when you meet me you'll see
I care.

But time is still boundless,
and my heart is still foundless
of love.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 01, 2008 11:57 pm

I really like both of those Alyssa!! Time is really good!! Great job!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:06 pm

"But time is still boundless,
and my heart is still foundless"

Sorry but foundless makes me laugh Very Happy
but aside from that it was a good poem.

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 08, 2008 1:53 pm

sweet, thanks Alexis and Alice!
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry, Anyone?   Wed Oct 08, 2008 8:34 pm

Anytime!

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