yeah nice try but let me rethink...................no.

I like yours though!

and you will never win, Bug

Awww. C'mon! Just one???? Please!? *gives puppy dog eyes*

And thank you very much.

New avatar? I like it.

Thank you Alexis. I love your poem it's great.

Oh we'll see who wins. By the way nice avatar.

thatnk you and i am letting you know it would be a lot easier for you to lust forfeit.

Forreit is not an option for me.

Okay guys I've got two more songs. I barely wrote them. (like seriously right this minute)

Don't Get Me Wrong, Just Forget I Exist


I'm sorry but Darling you just have to understand
You're one of those things I just can't stand
Don't get me wrong
But ever since you took my hand
I realized I coulden't live without your love
And I'm sorry but I'm not gonna risk myself that way
So before I get in more over my head
You'll have to understand
This was nothing more than a date in a bar
You'll just have to find a way to forget what happened
When we reached the bottom of that bottle Honey
You're all I could ask for and that makes you deadly
You're just so perfect its dangerous
So don't take this the wrong way
I just don't deserve all of this perfection
Much less your lovely complection
So don't take this the wrong way
But before I completely lose my head I'll ahve to say
True love can go to hell
I'm more for a one nights stand

Heres the 2nd one sorry its a little long....

You Need To Find Someone Else Who Will Accept To Dance

If my touch still burns your skin
If the sound of my still makes you shiver
Then our love still exists
If my lips still taste sweet to you
And if you listen when I talk to you
Then theres still some hope left
If hearing my name still makes you feel light as the rain
Then theres still something going on between you and me
If the way I smell still makes you turn around
Or if in my arms you find Paradise
Then what are you waiting for?
If the way I smile still drives you crazy
Then maybe we should take you to an asylum
If not being near me still makes you feel dead
Then maybe you should start lining up in front of the mausoleum
If staring into my eyes still makes you lose your mind
Then next time I walk by you should brace yourself
If the sight of me walking past your house still causes your heart to race
Then Darling you should avoid staring out your window for any length of time
If when I told you
"Were through, Goodbye"
Brought silent tears to your eyes
Then maybe next time you'll think twice
BEFORE you decide lie
If you still feel like you love me more than your own life
Then prepare to kill yourself and to see me in the underworld
Because you already broke my heart and sadly it can't be replaced
With me you already had your chance
You should find someone else with which to dance

Okay I change my mind I have 3. I ttly forgot about this one i wrote it a week ago. (sorry for being a space hog)

Satisfied By the Goddess of the Night

Here in this place
Waiting for you come
Waiting for your love
Waiting to stare into your eyes
I love you more than the day you left
I love you more than light itself
But for you I'm noly second best
I don't care
I just need some love from you
Just a little bit Hon
Even if its not the kind I want
I will be satisfied knowing that you care wheather I'm dead or alive
I will be satisfied for now
I will be satisfied if I can get lost in time with you
I will be satisfied for now if i can hold you tight
Satisfied if I run into you tonight
Goddess of the night
Tonight I will be satisfied, tonight
My sweet goddess of the night if I could look into your eyes tonight
I would be satisfied

Here's my newest. I wrote it yesterday and it kinda fits into the newest Assignment too.

All They Will Ever Know

Glancing at us across the floor
Dancing in circles, twirling ever more

He sighs, wanting to be more then the brother
Why should he even bother?

His head does a 360 tour
Looking at freedom toward the door

Though he stays, gathering his hope together
Maybe her answer won’t be “never”

The song comes to a close
But soon another begins that he knows

Then one of his wishes comes true
She reaches a hand out, a dance for two

A couple, it will never be so
Friendship is all they will even know

Ooooh. I like this one.

Goo Job! (notice i left the D in good out purposly)

lol Thanks. I'm actually happy with how that one turned out. The idea was stuck in my head for a couple weeks and I finally wrote it down.

Oh I know how you feel. Right now I have a paper with a title 5 lines and nothing else I'm lucky if I get 2 lines on it a day but its turning out pretty good.

I tend to write really short poems. Like maybe 5 lines total and I'll call it a "poem". That one up there is one of my few long ones. I'm really good at coming up with two lines that are amazing, then won't have ANY clue how to continue with my point. It's a little frustrating

Wow really? I woulden't be able to do that. If I don't write a lot I feel like I'm leaving something out but when I do write a lot I think its horrible and just a bunch of rambling. (It is rambling isn't it?)

No, I know what you mean. I think that's why I can't write long poems. I feel like I'm just rambling. But maybe that's the point of poetry? Random rambling?