Whitney's Poem

He took my breath away,
As I saw his face.
Seems like he came from Heaven,
And took a mortal's place.

He slowly started walking,
And came closer to me.
My feet would not move,
And I could not breathe.

My heart skipped a beat,
And my knees felt weak.
There was no air in my lungs,
No more words to speak.

He slowly touched my cheek,
And my mind went spinning around.
He looked into my eyes,
And I was floating off the ground.

When I touched his soft hair,
My fingertips felt numb.
I looked into his eyes,
And I knew my prince had come.

I knew that I was happy,
For I felt no need to cry.
And I knew I was reborn,
For it felt like I had died.

I knew I was in Heaven,
For his love was meant to stay.
And when he softly kissed my lips,
He took my breath away.

YAY ABBEY!!! Gawd, I wish I had a guy like that...oh wait, I do! Yay me!

Loved it, Abbey! Encore!

thanks you guys

AHHHHHH! I love it Whitney. I don't know any guys like that


I knew that I was happy,
For I felt no need to cry.
And I knew I was reborn,
For it felt like I had died.
^^^that's my fave part. brilliantly phrased.

thanks mom....i dont know any guys like that either

its good very good

thank you