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 Beginning of my story

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PostSubject: Beginning of my story   Beginning of my story Icon_minitimeFri Nov 27, 2009 3:49 pm

Your clock is ticking, as is mine. The clock of life, like a pulsating heartbeat. The alarm will go off soon. You will fight as I watch your flailing arms, your silent pleas. Thrash. Squirm. Scream.

Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-bum.

You can feel your life about to be stopped, like a clock with no batteries.

Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-bum.

The final ticks of your clock are fast and rushed. Two minutes pass. A lifetime of ticks in those two minutes. The ticks cram together to form one sound.

Ba-bum-ba-bum-ba-bum

I smile, lower my face, and then…

Silence.
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